And so, with a shriek of tortured metal and a shower of pavement-ground sparks, the last semi-functioning Negafleet scout ship fades into the post-modern La. skyline…. with Bunz in vocal and hot pursuit.
Little did they know, those incredibly ancient and advanced aliens, with intellects vast, cool and unsympathetic, that their machinations would be brought to naught by “the merest of the creatures that God in his wisdom had put upon this Earth”; the beat cop and a tow truck.
Of course, Chapter Two will be jam packed full of Thrills, Excitement, Pyrotechnics, Pathos – possibly even a bit of Plot… All those things that we didn’t have room for in Chapter One…
When Bunz tries to recover her vehicle, she might explain the situation that it is an experimental vehicle. That would get her out of one set of problems. You can get an experimental vehicle license at least in Kansas.
Ahh… I believe I perceive your misconception… you are attempting to think through this issue in a logical, methodical manor… However, I believe that Bunz would tell you sir, that “This is not a time for logic – this is a time for stupid and disproportionate destruction!!”
I um… hope Katz’ explanation isn’t too technical for the casual readers, what with the insider Comix jargon… We jus’ try to keep everyone up to speed…
And so, with a shriek of tortured metal and a shower of pavement-ground sparks, the last semi-functioning Negafleet scout ship fades into the post-modern La. skyline…. with Bunz in vocal and hot pursuit.
Little did they know, those incredibly ancient and advanced aliens, with intellects vast, cool and unsympathetic, that their machinations would be brought to naught by “the merest of the creatures that God in his wisdom had put upon this Earth”; the beat cop and a tow truck.
I hope, when it comes, we can tell the difference between the end of Chapter One and the start of Chapter Two.
On the other hand, it’ll probably be funny, so what does it matter?
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Of course, Chapter Two will be jam packed full of Thrills, Excitement, Pyrotechnics, Pathos – possibly even a bit of Plot… All those things that we didn’t have room for in Chapter One…
Poor Bunz… what a humiliating comedown for an Emissary of Planetary Doom…
When Bunz tries to recover her vehicle, she might explain the situation that it is an experimental vehicle. That would get her out of one set of problems. You can get an experimental vehicle license at least in Kansas.
Ahh… I believe I perceive your misconception… you are attempting to think through this issue in a logical, methodical manor… However, I believe that Bunz would tell you sir, that “This is not a time for logic – this is a time for stupid and disproportionate destruction!!”
When in trouble or in doubt, run in circles, scream and shout!
(Thousands of junior military officers can’t be wrong!)